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1 "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:43 am

ivor

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Good to see a story by Danny on the board again - you know you are not going to be disappointed.

This one does not involve his 'favourite' implement, but loses nothing for that. Very atmospheric and something of a trial of strength between the two parties from which both emerge with credit - as indeed can the author.

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2 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:57 am

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It's a day to celebrate! The return on the MMSA board of Dkellis! I wonderful caning! HOT!

Both votes from me!

"ugly Americanisms?" You talking to me?


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3 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:02 am

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Skater wrote:

"ugly Americanisms?" You talking to me?

No - he said 'isms' not 'cans' Laughing

(I shall now seek sanctuary somewhere that doesn't have an extradition treaty with the US)

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4 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:14 am

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ivor wrote:
Skater wrote:

"ugly Americanisms?" You talking to me?

No - he said 'isms' not 'cans' Laughing

(I shall now seek sanctuary somewhere that doesn't have an extradition treaty with the US)

A distinction without a difference or is it different?


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5 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:19 am

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I shall refrain from comment on Ugly Americanisms. Crying or Very sad

I really enjoyed Danny's story. He takes a familiar scenario--the pervy headmaster who enjoys the disciplinary side of his work far too much--and makes it uniquely his own. I just love Danny's descriptions:

One of the things I like about boys in school uniform, aside from the fact they are all subject to my cane, is how it never quite fits properly. There is something very satisfying about watching a boy grow into his shorts. The boy grows taller and wider, but the shorts just stay the same, getting tighter and tighter around their pert young bottoms. It is a sad day when their mothers finally decree it is time for a new pair.

Everyone had better check this out and read it. And VOTE, of course, because it is both hot and well written.

Kat

6 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:23 am

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I loved how the Head "touched" many different canes before selecting the "right" one.


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7 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:42 am

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Both votes from me too.

Some more of the kind of description that Kat praised:

"...sensitive crease of skin inadvertently on show, begging for the cane's kiss. With only a slight tinge of pink to mar its pale purity"

"A red line rose across his pale skin; well placed and visible. [...] It was an exquisite welt."


May I dare to suggest that only the cane can produce "exquisite" pain?

8 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:06 pm

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You guys!!! Embarassed


This is a bit off the wall for me. I was having a really hard time writing, so instead of struggling with something that'd usually be easy, I decided to struggle with something that will always be hard. It's not terrible, but it's nothing particularly special either.

Thank you for all your kind comments. I'm really embarrassed to be quoted!!!

Oh, and for the record "ugly Americanisms" was my term, not Emlyn's. It's from one of my primary school teachers, and I love the way it rolls off the tongue! Sorry!


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9 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:00 pm

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I usually skip caning stories, since they are so far outside my experience. The exceptions are ones you guys have written.

I'm definitely glad I didn't give this one a miss. Great job, Danny.

10 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Fri Feb 25, 2011 11:17 pm

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Not just a good story, but a poetry of words and the imagery of a paintbrush in the mind.

11 Re: "A Caning" - by Dkellis on Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:06 am

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A very fun story. One that takes a very usual trope of our genre and turns it into a fascinating story all it's own. I love the way Danny details both characters in thumbnail sketches, and the way he develops the quite different tensions of the master and student.

Oh, and Danny... Bransom has extradition with everyone. Maybe your next story should be of a wise mouthed young miscreant receiving a public birching (Eton, not Manx - we don't want to damage that pretty bottom too much Twisted Evil )

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12 "A Caning" by Dkellis on Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:09 am

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I agree with Kat.
Incidentally, it was always more interesting caning boys who were growing out of their grey short trousers. This was usually near the end of the term before long trousers were uniform requirement.

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