http://www.malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=24480
First link

http://www.malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=24488
Second part

Our own David Katz two part series(so far) has hit the board today. The first part is rather bleak with some sunshine.(death in this case) Arnie struggles to find out what real love from a father figure really is!

I can't recommend this series enough. I think it is certainly shield worthy!

Both votes from me anyway!

Don't miss it!

I agree completely with Skateski. This is a special series, which is remarkably well written and moving.

Arnie, the main character, is on a journey that begins with his escape from an abusive father and is moving towards a loving relationship with his stepfather.

Kat

Me too.

David's narration from a 10yo viewpoint conveyed a degree of realism, of being there, that authors seldom achieve.

Thank you all for the kind comments so far. I must admit that I have a talented editor.

I guess I will own it. I was pissed off when "Spanking Defined" did not earn a shield. I was not surprised about "The End is the Beginning" due to the nature of the abuse it portrayed.

I have been calmed down by the fact that they both went red rather quickly and "Defined" is only 3 votes from being solid red.

Chapter 3 is with the editor and chapter 4 is in draft now.

I am loving Arnie and I want you all to love him too.

thanks to you all! Do me a favor, if you haven't read them, please do so.

I really loved both of these stories. David managed to present Arnie's point of view so perfectly. I could almost hear a sound track as I read these, they are so good!

I want to thank Bransom.

I think my affiliation here is helping the traffic to and response to these stories. Between the two of them, they are about to make 2000 hits and they have only been up a short time. Also I was happy that they both went red AND yellow in quick time with "Defined" now being double solid.

If I were not here, I do not think that would happen.

This kind of response is new to me and has never happened this great and this quickly before. I have just recently, with some of the newer "Davey Shares" stuff, been pleasured to ever go double solid and, again, I credit Bransom. But it still took a while.

I love the way we all support each other - it helps and it is appreciated.

Thank you all!!!

Well it's nice to hear good things about this nice place and helping each other is great, I think the wonderful series speaks for itself and stands very well on it's own too!

Congrats Katz!