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BOTD 4/8/14 "Machiavelli Lives" A Memory Man Production

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David M. Katz


Marshall
Machiavelli Lives
A Memory Man Production

A short story with only a beginning and middle.  The challenge is to add an ending.  


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From left Brad, Joey. Russ, Darren & Tyler, all 13 or just 14
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Since your wife died  three years ago you have drawn very close to your son Brad, your relationship becoming more buddy than father and son.  He's a good kid and you have only needed to spank him once since your wife's death.  Brad has a circle of four very close friends, so close that you sometimes call them the Five Musketeers.  Often around your place they are ebullient and relatively uninhibited in your presence; they don't regard you as a straight laced old grump and they tend to include you in their good natured banter; - which you take as rather a compliment.

It is Brad's fourteenth Birthday and you have taken the gang out to your lakeside cabin for a barbecue.  On arrival the boys immediately hit the water and start larking around.  You get the barbie lit and then join them while the coals heat up.  As you all emerge from the water you notice that Brad's board shorts have sagged to expose the top half of his rump and you succumb to the temptation to apply a couple of quick stingoors.

His cheeks are cold and wet and he spins round with an outraged "What was that for?" As he rubs away at the sting.  The gang all laugh at his discomfiture but soon some of their ribald comments turn towards you.

"Enough" you thunder in mock anger. "For that cheek you can all join Brad in his birthday spanks."  They crease up on hearing that "You'll have to catch us first" they challenge.

You realise that your chances of catching the agile little squirts is minimal and that if you did manage to grab one the others would most likely gang up on you and you'll end up being scragged.  You let it drop and turn to tend the barbie whilst the boys start throwing a ball around as they dry off.  When you go to the car to get the meat it dawns on you that all the party food, drinks and the ice cream are in there, still in their cold boxes.  As you take out the raw burgers and sausages an evil thought enters your head - and you lock the car behind you.

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?


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John Boy


Sherrif
Not sure, depends on how Evil or Very Mad this idea really is.

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David M. Katz


Marshall
I am glad I have this sort of relationship with my son and his friends. I think an ice bath from the ice and cold water in the cooler would be fun. I will then get in some stingors and tickles before they gang up on me.

I think it will be a fun birthday for my boy.


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1strappedboy


Sherrif
The Twisted Evil me is loving this chance 'get even with' the younger generation.  I too am glad I have such a good working relationship with my son and I know he'll not be too outraged by the impending ice bath.  

Of course after I 'get them' and birthday swats have occurred, I'll have to give them some occasion to 'pay me back' which I too will take in its stride. It's all in good fun and I want the kids to see it that way.



Last edited by 1strappedboy on Tue Apr 08, 2014 2:51 pm; edited 1 time in total

Padraig


Trailboss
The ice bath entered my mind too.

Kat


Editor Extraordinaire
Ice bath followed by stingoors sounds good to me.

Kat

ivor


Marshall
Can't improve on that idea

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MemoryMan


Sherrif
But I've locked the car. scratch 

By the way I did continue writing to finish the story, I'll post part 3 later.

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David M. Katz


Marshall
MemoryMan wrote:But I've locked the car. scratch 


Yeah, but the keys are in my pocket.  Very Happy   tongue 


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ivor


Marshall
A toasted bun in exchange for a toasted bun? Evil or Very Mad 

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MemoryMan


Sherrif
David M. Katz wrote:
MemoryMan wrote:But I've locked the car. scratch 


Yeah, but the keys are in my pocket.   Very Happy   tongue 

The plot deepens Twisted Evil

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Stone Man


Marshall
How many stingoors is a cool drink worth?

Iconoclast


Trailboss
I should have told the boys that skinny dipping was the order of the day! But it is not too late, they can take off their shorts, etc and let them dry in the sun while they go back in the water.

Iconoclast

MemoryMan


Sherrif
Ivor's picture intrigued me; it conveyed such a light hearted atmosphere that is seemed an almost impossible challenge to weave a plausible spanking story round it - so I had a go.

Its past my bedtime now so here comes the final part



.......................... an evil thought enters your head - and you lock the car behind you.

You drop the first mix of burgers and sausages on the barbie, sit on the bench in front of the cabin and call "Grub will be ready soon Brad; time for your Birthday Spanking"

"No Way." He responds.  But before he can escape his loyal and true friends grab him and gleefully march him to you before gathering round to watch the execution.  As you manoeuvre Brad across your lap the cry goes up Bare ...... Bare .......  Do it bare .......and  Joey (who  seems to take the lead in most gang activities) darts forward to drag his shorts down and off.

As you start to iron out the goose pimples on Brad's butt the gang start to count in unison, interspersed with calls of harder .... harder; and a big cheer goes up as you make the last one - the one to grow on - a real zinger.

"You rats!" Brad calls them laughingly as he jumps up ruefully rubbing his butt. They crowd round him laughing, congratulating him and patting him on the back.  You leave it a minute before calling out "Right! Who's next then?" They fall silent and turn to look at you in amazement.

You repeat the question but still there are no volunteers so, as the first burgers and sausages start to sizzle, you rephrase the question.  " O.K!  I'll put it another way then.  Who wants to eat?"

The kids continue to stare blankly at you for a moment - and then Joey starts to laugh and turns to the gang  "Looks like the crafty old fox has nailed us this time.  Anyway I want to eat" he grins as he comes forward to shuck down his shorts and drop across your lap.

As you get to work on him you hear a lone voice enthusiastically exhorting you "Give it him Dad....   2.... 3.... Harder ...... 4.... 5.... Harder ........ 6.... Harder ....................................."

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Padraig


Trailboss
cute story!

1strappedboy


Sherrif
I like that ending!  Laughing 

Stone Man


Marshall
Lets see.... An army marches on it's stomach... the way to a man's heart is through his stomach... a spanking is the way for a boy's stomach to get filled - - Works for me! Twisted Evil 

With this bunch of boys, I can't imagine this is the first time they've all been in line for good boy spankings.

ivor


Marshall
MM - you done well!  Laughing 

When I originally came across this pic I couldn't think of a scenario so I passed it to Katz who usually comes up with good group ones as it seemed a shame to waste it. I think though it defeated him which was why he put it out on offer.

Personally I'd spank one of them for being too lazy to change out of his pyjama trousers  Smile 

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