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BOTD 02-06-2015 Brothery "Love" - A Memory Man Production

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Skater


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 Brotherly "Love?"
A Memory Man Production

You, Lee, are still a month short of your sixteenth birthday but for just over three years you have been the man of the house.  You do your best to help your mother who has been struggling to both hold down a job and provide a good home both for you and your eleven year old brother Dennis.  

You idolised your dad and still have fond memories of him.  You keep a framed photo of the two of you, taken not long before he died, on your dresser.

That your Dad was a firm believer in the efficiacy of spanking did nothing to sully your memory of him and although your mother continued with that method of discipline after his death her spankings were nothing like your dad's. (his strap still hangs, unused since his death, in the cupboard under the stairs)  Nevertheless you always cried, even as your pants were coming down you cried, more from guilt and remorse of knowing you'd let her down when she was depending on you, than from the relatively mild pain she was about to inflict.  You haven't been spanked for over two years.

Dennis though is an opposite, whilst you muck in and do all you can to help Mum he skimps or skips his chores and is mouthy and disrespectful to her to the point that you are often tempted to pummel the little shit yourself.  Rarely a week goes by without you having the satisfaction of watching him being spanked.  Oh! Yes he cries then(just like a crocodile cries) and he makes a big fuss and pouts after it but he doesn't fool you.  You notice his little pole is always rigid when she lets him up - and you have your suspicions.

Tonight is Mum's regular weekly night out with some of her friends, a regular night you have set aside in order to be able to be at home to watch Dennis for her.  Tonight though the little shit is being particularly obnoxious and you pick up a Jokari paddle and threaten to spank him with it.

Lee (You) - 15
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Dennis - 11
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"No way, you can't, you are not my bloody dad"

"Bloody Dad?"  your fists ball up but you restrain yourself  "Just try me.  Bet you daren't drop your pants for it" you respond icily.

To your surprise his pants hit the floor and he stands facing you, smirking, his stiff little rod pointing straight up at you.

...................

Are you up for the challenge? - - Bloody stupid question.

How will you spank him?

Will you spank him hard enough and for long enough to bring genuine tears - and deflate his rod?  

Will you use that Jokari blade you threatened?  

Or perhaps the "Bloody Dad's" strap that you dreaded getting may be more appropriate?

Also will you be reporting the incident to Mum on her return?


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David M. Katz


Marshall
The assumption is that Dennis may be a budding spanko but I think he will feel differently about the Jokari. I won't spank him now. I will have a talk with Mom and suggest it is what he needs. After Mom blesses it then I will wear him out with the paddle.

I think we will see a new and improved Dennis.


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StevieWeeks


Trailboss
I'll just send Dennis for a hair cut and all...

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AFinch


Sherrif
Nothing to add to DMK's excellent response.

John Boy


Sherrif
AFinch wrote:Nothing to add to DMK's excellent response.
Ditto

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Stone Man


Marshall
John Boy wrote:
AFinch wrote:Nothing to add to DMK's excellent response.
Ditto

Same here. Is it too early for the strap? Or is that for when he is older?

Padraig


Trailboss
AFinch wrote:Nothing to add to DMK's excellent response.

That's adult thinking. At 15 I'm still aboy too (don't dare to say that) and I will not give my brother a chance to tease me further.

ivor


Marshall
Reckon Padraig has got it right.

I'm going to enjoy the next few minutes and so is Dennis, but I bet his enjoyment will turn to howls pretty quickly whereas I'll keep on smiling. Smile Smile Smile

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Jack


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I think I have to agree with Padraig and Ivor on this one.


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squarecutter


Sherrif
I am going to have to leave it. But next time Dennis spouts off I think I am going to force the issue with his Mom. If she realises that he may 
be enjoying her ministrations she may just hand the matter over to me.

Kat


Editor Extraordinaire
I also agree with Padraig and Ivor about the outcome for the scenario. I have to disagree with several people that more severe spankings are the fix if Dennis is, in fact, a budding spanko. Mum needs to develop a consistent approach to discipline that is mostly reinforcement based; it also must find ways other than cp to punish Dennis when necessary. I certainly feel that it's inappropriate for an older brother still living at home and subject to Mum's discipline to assume a parental role.

Kat

MemoryMan


Sherrif
Perhaps this sort of BOTD doesn't really work here?

I was rather disappointed to get mainly adult responses rather than have respondees take the opportunity to drop into role and regress to a bit of 15yo thinking.

Anyway I can feel a story germinating around this but since I'm gadding off again for a few days it will have to wait

Watch this space

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David M. Katz


Marshall
MemoryMan wrote:

Anyway I can feel a story germinating around this

I think it would make an excellent story! Very Happy


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MemoryMan wrote:Perhaps this sort of BOTD doesn't really work here?

I was rather disappointed to get mainly adult responses rather than have respondees take the opportunity to drop into role and regress to a bit of 15yo thinking.

At 15 years old, I would have punched the little snot in his arm, slipped my thumb into the hinge of his jaw, then, when he begged me to stop, I would have sent him to his room for the rest of the night. Something like this would have scared the crap on me, because I wouldn't trust him to keep quiet.


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Pi Beta


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I suspect - though it is difficult to revert one's age over 50 years - that I'd have grabbed hold of him, thrown him to the floor and sat on him telling him just what I thought of his bad-mouthing our departed father and his disrespect. He'd not move from that position until I'd have some understanding from him as to why I was so mad with him and an acknowledgement that he was totally out of order. I wouldn't have disciplined him as such, but I suspect the odd punch might have been delivered while I manoeuvred him to the ground and knelt on his chest or upper arms.

MemoryMan


Sherrif
MemoryMan wrote:Perhaps this sort of BOTD doesn't really work here?

I was rather disappointed to get mainly adult responses rather than have respondees take the opportunity to drop into role and regress to a bit of 15yo thinking.

Anyway I can feel a story germinating around this but since I'm gadding off again for a few days it will have to wait

Watch this space

Well!  The germinating story has germinated, but once I started writing it took off in a new unplanned direction and become a longish (for me) coming of age type of story.  Anyway if you read it and enjoy it the extra effort of writing will have been worthwhile.

Childhood's End......and a New Beginning  has just been submitted to MMSA's review team

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