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1 My Brother, My Boyfriend, and Me on Fri Apr 29, 2016 2:04 pm

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My Brother, My boyfriend, and Me was posted overnight at MMSA.

This one was a lot of fun to write for a couple of reasons.  I will warn you that it's pretty raunchy, but in a good, fun way.

There is something else I have to say about this story, but I'm going to wait to see what people think.  

If you saw the end coming, let me know, but please, be honest.


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2 Re: My Brother, My Boyfriend, and Me on Fri Apr 29, 2016 3:19 pm

AFinch

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I loved the twist. And I didn't see it coming at all.

3 Re: My Brother, My Boyfriend, and Me on Thu Jun 15, 2017 5:20 pm

Jack

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My Gosh!

I just received feedback on this story (yesteday, I think), and was writing a response. I decided to link this thread and came here to find that only Kier had responded to it. No wonder I never came back and discussed the surprise.

Kier - thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad I was able to fool you.


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4 Re: My Brother, My Boyfriend, and Me on Thu Jun 15, 2017 10:33 pm

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Good story.  I didn't anticipate the ending at all, but since we had discussed such endings in chat earlier in the day, it wasn't entirely a surprise.

http://www.malespank.net/listAuthor.php?author=Adric

5 Re: My Brother, My Boyfriend, and Me on Fri Jun 16, 2017 4:25 am

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Adric wrote:Good story.  I didn't anticipate the ending at all, but since we had discussed such endings in chat earlier in the day, it wasn't entirely a surprise.

It's funny, for some reason, I never got much feedback on this, so it's hard draw any conclusions. However, the people with whom I discussed it all seemed to be pretty surprised.

This is Your Last Chance to Avoid the Spoiler!:


I did spend some time thinking about this....

I was trying to find my original discussion with Kat when he edited this story. While I couldn't locate that, i did find an early feedback from Cam, and it had this:

BTW - did you see all the clues when you read it the second time? Tyler's upper body is hairless for one. For another, Tyler points out that he'll have to leave for school earlier next year, but if Travis is in 8th grade, they would both be in high school next year, if Tyler was older. During Trav's spanking, Tyler actually calls him 'big brother' at one point, and the way their birthdays fall (barely a year apart, but with Tyler's after the first of the year, so they're two grades apart) is only possible if Travis is the older brother. It also makes the question about 'how big is he?' have a totally different meaning.

Yeah, this one was a lot of fun to write, both for the pure, raunchy fun, and working hints in to make it 'fair' without giving away the big reveal.



Anyway, thanks for the feedback, Adric (and Kier, though the thanks is pretty darned belated). Glad you enjoyed it.


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