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25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology

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1 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 5:22 pm

Jack


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Your Name is Cole. You're 15 years old. This year, you're the oldest boy in the house. Your big brother, Blake, went to college this year. You love and admire your big brother, but he can also be a huge pain in the ass. It seems like he's always ignoring you. You want to be friends with him, but nothing you do seems to make him happy. So, since you can't get his attention in good ways, you get it by provoking him. Yeah, sometimes that causes trouble (and your Uncle has busted your butt for it before, though your parents mostly write it off to sibling rivalry), but at least it gets his attention. The trouble is, he's a bit more constrained than you are, but he's still good at it when he wants to be.

And then he comes home for Thanksgiving Break and you realize something.


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You are now taller than your big older brother.

That's actually great, because not only have you surpassed him, but, at only 5'9", you know he's always been sensitive about his height. You start rubbing it in as soon as he arrives home Tuesday. He snaps at you a couple of times, and tries to ignore you a lot, until he finally storms off and slams his bedroom door in your face. The next morning, he won't even talk to you, ignoring you unless he has no other choice. You ask your mom, but she just says, 'you broke it, you fix it.'

So, since Mom is no help, you wait until you get to your uncles house. You try to tell him the problem, and he sends you to his bathroom. This is something he does sometimes - having you shower, then he'll clean up your back (where it's hard to reach with the Proactiv) while talking to you. He says it's easier to talk that way, and it seems like it's mostly true.

With a towel around your waist, your uncle works on your back (which mostly feels good, though is occasionally painful), and he listens to what you have to say, occasionally asking a question. When you're through, the two of you talk about general stuff, while he finishes your back. Then he undoes the towel, and unfolds it, leaving your butt bare. After a second, he walks over to the vanity, and you see him pick up a hairbrush before coming back.

The brush rests against your butt for a second, then your uncle speaks.

"Why were you making fun of his height?"

Pop!

You answer him, taking a second to think about it, then he speaks again.

"Don't you know he's sensitive about it?"

Again and again, your uncle asks a lot of the same questions you've been asking yourself, except he accents each one with a pop on the butt. He's not especially gentle, and your butt's really stinging after not too many questions. You're not sure how many you get - maybe sixteen? Then he stops and sets the brush on the small of your back.

"I think I see three ways we can solve this, Cole. I can put you over my knee and wear you out, then you can go apologize to Blake. Or, I can find Blake and invite him down here, then he can watch me wear you out, before you apologize to him. Or maybe... just maybe, you can go find him and apologize to him, and that'll be enough. Which one do you think we need, or do you have another idea?"


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2 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 5:36 pm

John Boy


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Option three, however if he is still mad at me option 2

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3 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 5:39 pm

StevieWeeks


Trailboss
Stevie has absolutely no sympathy whatever for some arsehole that is 'sensitive' about being only 5 ' 9" (which is a perfectly normal height) and all...

No punishment is necessary... except maybe for Blake, who is the real baby...

Stevie.

(I find the implication that there is something wrong with being 'only' 5' 9" highly offensive)

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4 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 6:40 pm

Y Lee Coyote


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Whacking Coles is not going to be productive in anyway.  He already knows/realizes he messed up.  This is a problem that has been going on for years, perhaps even a decade, and the parents have failed to correct the situation and have allowed bad habits to become the norm in both lads.

Blake was allowed to snub (disrespect!) his kid brother so that at Cole learnt to get some of the attention he needed by acting badly.  He also became desensitized to Blake’s pain so he carried things to far.

Correspondingly, Cole needs to be taught that he was not entitled to Blake attention all the time.

Cole can not apologize and start the peace process unless Blake agrees.  Blake needs a session with Uncle just like Coles had.  Both lads need to understand this is a long time problem and not just sibling rivalry.

Y.

P.S.  The parents should be flogged for their callous disregard of their duty.

EDIT: Snuffed out some typos.



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5 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 10:40 pm

Kat


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Option 3

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6 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 11:17 pm

David M. Katz


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Three for me.


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7 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Sun Nov 27, 2016 11:32 pm

AFinch


Sherrif
Three for me too

8 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Mon Nov 28, 2016 3:00 am

db105


Trailboss
Cole: "Option 3, please".

Evil-Spanko-Me Uncle: "You know, I think we'll do option 2, just to be on the safe side." (Evil laugh)

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9 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Mon Nov 28, 2016 3:04 am

ivor


Marshall
I'm very much with YLC.

According to the scenario Cole has tried to apologise but Blake won't talk to him.

I wonder how many times Blake was spanked in the past for 'insulting' Cole? Seems to me this situation has already gone somewhere it shouldn't.

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10 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Mon Nov 28, 2016 9:39 am

kalico


Sherrif
I'm with the 3 crowd ..,.



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11 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Mon Nov 28, 2016 11:00 am

Jack


Admin
StevieWeeks wrote:(I find the implication that there is something wrong with being 'only' 5' 9" highly offensive)

There doesn't have to be anything 'wrong with' something, for someone to still be sensitive about it.

ivor wrote:According to the scenario Cole has tried to apologise but Blake won't talk to him.

I don't actually see that in the scenario, and I didn't mean to imply it. It would make things a bit different.


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12 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Mon Nov 28, 2016 12:49 pm

ivor


Marshall
Jack wrote:
ivor wrote:According to the scenario Cole has tried to apologise but Blake won't talk to him.

I don't actually see that in the scenario, and I didn't mean to imply it.  It would make things a bit different.

This is what I based my comment on:

The next morning, he won't even talk to you, ignoring you unless he has no other choice.

I agree that doesn't actually say he tried to apologise, but taking that with his Mom's comment implies to me that he wanted/intended to but couldn't get past Blake's barrier.

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13 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Tue Nov 29, 2016 11:51 am

Jack


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I figured that's what you meant, Ivor. I meant it more as 'I tried to let things be normal, but he was still all mad." I do see how it could be taken other ways, though.

I thought I should mention that this was inspired by a real event, but I spiced it up a bit.

Cole and Blake are two of those boys who can get along for a long time, but they always seem to end up fighting. To me, four years or so seems to be the worst age for siblings. Blake and Cole both get along with Aidan, but always seem to have trouble between each other.

Cole did come to me because Blake was mad at him. Both of them never want to apologize to the other, largely because of a laundry list of complaints that go back basically to Blake saying, "Yeah, but everything was fine until you were born!" As they get older, they're getting better about not dragging up every complaint, and I was able to get Cole to admit that he'd started it this time, and that he needed to suck it up and apologize for it this time.

"You mean I should be the bigger man?"

At that point, I threatened to bust his butt, but I have to admit that it was kind of funny.


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14 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Tue Nov 29, 2016 11:55 am

John Boy


Sherrif
LOL Bigger Man!

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15 Re: 25 November 2016 - A Sore Apology on Tue Nov 29, 2016 12:38 pm

db105


Trailboss
Jack wrote:
"You mean I should be the bigger man?"
.

Smart alec! Laughing

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