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1 After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Sat May 06, 2017 2:39 pm

David M. Katz

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MM's newest is a delightful story set in post WW2 1940's England. The story conveys how things were at the time and shows us the good relationship between David and his parents.

A simple domestic transgression (missing curfew) serves to show the fact that we are all human and make mistakes, parents and kids alike.

The story is superb and should not be missed.


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Adric

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This is indeed a superb and beautiful story of a great father-son relationship at an interesting and difficult time in history.  I loved it, especially the ending when David feels a "need to know" that we can all relate to.  This is a great beginning to what I hope will be a long and very interesting series of stories.  Two thumbs up ("hot" and "well-written") for this excellent MMSA story.  I hope MM is already working on the next one.

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Kat

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I also enjoyed it. Glad to see you back on the front page, MM!

Kat

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Very nice story, MM!

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18Smacked

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This was a true delight to read! Superbly done, it enables the reader to regress back in time to a very different philosophy. I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment.

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David M. Katz

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"Part 2 - Stuart Arrives" is now available and is a must read.

http://www.malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=38685


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7 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Tue May 16, 2017 10:12 am

Adric

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Another beautiful story in this great series; completely realistic and believable in every way.  It is hard to imagine which parts of the story, if any, might be fictional.  I'm very much looking forward to future installments of this series.

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Adric

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Part 3 of the After the War series is now available and is an excellent story:

Part 3 - Stuart's Bravado

Loved the "wanna bet?" part, and the outcome.

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9 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Sat May 27, 2017 10:28 pm

Kat

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Very good installment in the series.

Kat

10 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Tue Jun 06, 2017 8:01 pm

Adric

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Part 4 of the After the War series is now available and is an excellent story:

Part 4 - Settling a Bet

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11 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Tue Jun 06, 2017 11:30 pm

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I fully concur with Adric; MemoryMan has written a wonderful series and has given all of us a real treat!

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12 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Jun 07, 2017 1:06 am

AFinch

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I also agree. A great read that pushed all of my buttons.

13 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Jun 07, 2017 4:18 am

MemoryMan

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Thank you all very much for the kind comments.  Although it was still wartime when I was the same age as the characters things didn't change very quickly over the next ten years or so.

I'm enjoying writing the series, a real "memoryman" nostalgic journey avoiding travelling too far into the fantasy world.  Although "settling the bet" will have some (un)surprising consequences.

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14 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Jun 14, 2017 12:16 pm

Adric

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Part 5 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story:

Part 5 - The End of Innocence

Excellent unsurprising consequences from settling the bet.

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15 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:06 pm

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Adric is right- MemoryMan has spun a great story of "traditional consequences" for us! The latest chapter is extremely readable and enjoyable. Anyone who misses out on this series will cheat themselves from a fantastic ride. Be sure to catch this series!

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16 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Thu Jun 15, 2017 1:42 am

David M. Katz

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A superbly crafted series! cheers


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17 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Sun Jun 25, 2017 8:00 am

Adric

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Part 6 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story:

Part 6 - Stu & Dad

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18 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Fri Jul 07, 2017 8:44 pm

Adric

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Part 7 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story:

Part 7 - Brothers? - In Trouble

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19 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Thu Jul 27, 2017 10:14 am

Adric

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Part 8 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story.  I particularly liked David's loyalty and sense of duty to his friend not to let him down, and the happy ending.

Part 8 - The Fright of My Life

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20 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Thu Jul 27, 2017 10:16 am

David M. Katz

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Adric wrote:Part 8 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story.  I particularly liked David's loyalty and sense of duty to his friend not to let him down, and the happy ending.

Part 8 - The Fright of My Life

Adric says it well.

I continue to enjoy this series but David really impressed me in this one.


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21 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Tue Aug 08, 2017 6:19 am

Adric

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Part 9 of the After the War series is now available and is a great story.

Part 9 - The Homecoming

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22 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:20 pm

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This entire series is superbly written, with a tightly written story line that is fascinating to follow from one episode to the next. If you have not been reading this, you're missing out on a real treat!

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23 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Wed Aug 09, 2017 11:19 pm

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MM continues to relate his well-written tale of Stu and David superbly.

Very enjoyable and very relateable.


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24 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Fri Aug 18, 2017 6:38 pm

David M. Katz

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Part 10 "Expiation" has just been posted.

http://www.malespank.net/viewStory.php?id=39281

I told MM that this chaper was my favorite so far. David and Stu continue to be wonderful characters.

This chapter introduces us to an elderly couple who own a local shop. I love the couple. They are the epitome of kind and understanding.

Also:

This is Memory Man's 100th MMSA story!!! cheers cheers cheers


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25 Re: After The War Part 1 – Home by MemoryMan on Fri Aug 18, 2017 7:17 pm

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MemoryMan:
Many congrats (100, in fact) to MM on your 100th story at MMSA! That is a real accomplishment of which to be proud- especially when they are of the high quality that you produce. I hope the string of these fine products will continue for many years to come.

MMSA will be most highly enriched when that happens, that's for sure!
cheers cheers cheers cheers

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